tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post1711039061807073086..comments2024-03-28T17:44:17.403-07:00Comments on The Weaver of Grass: Early for the Poetry Bus this week.The Weaver of Grasshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-63508591045962249492010-09-16T17:48:04.447-07:002010-09-16T17:48:04.447-07:00what a beautiful poem Weaver. One can't help ...what a beautiful poem Weaver. One can't help but picture the dark water and the slipping shape.BThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16800917080090010655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-31783256384215650482010-09-14T07:28:15.885-07:002010-09-14T07:28:15.885-07:00Weaver, you've painted a beautiful word pictur...Weaver, you've painted a beautiful word picture here. I love it. Thanks for riding on the Poetry Bus with me. Blessings!!Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-28696143179310504662010-09-14T06:04:35.225-07:002010-09-14T06:04:35.225-07:00I really enjoyed this, Weaver. All those colours t...I really enjoyed this, Weaver. All those colours traded for something more monochrome.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-43010440309718836512010-09-14T04:17:43.698-07:002010-09-14T04:17:43.698-07:00Lovely poem, Weaver. It takes me right there in th...Lovely poem, Weaver. It takes me right there in the dark, reminds me I forgot my sweater.NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-12317264638678403982010-09-13T16:41:16.359-07:002010-09-13T16:41:16.359-07:00If this is what you do when you're not aiming ...If this is what you do when you're not aiming for perfection, I'd love to see something when you're really trying!!Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-8622084926132549512010-09-13T07:33:44.354-07:002010-09-13T07:33:44.354-07:00Without light there are no colors.
Nice piece, We...Without light there are no colors.<br /><br />Nice piece, Weaver!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-87973041171574109772010-09-13T02:40:51.227-07:002010-09-13T02:40:51.227-07:00If this is what you can do with no time to hone, I...If this is what you can do with no time to hone, I think you'd be a force to reckon with if you had the time! This is very visual with the coming night and the creature that disturbs the calm.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-23654915748100220582010-09-12T14:36:25.290-07:002010-09-12T14:36:25.290-07:00Very beautiful, and I love the absence of colour i...Very beautiful, and I love the absence of colour in the colour week - <br />"But the light had gone."<br /><br />And thanks for naming the bridge - it is stunning.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-30730158305071912242010-09-12T08:46:21.668-07:002010-09-12T08:46:21.668-07:00I'm with pattern on this.
No use fiddlin'...I'm with pattern on this. <br /><br />No use fiddlin' with something this immediate.Lorenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03152302644577926337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-18166587449500563862010-09-12T07:27:31.044-07:002010-09-12T07:27:31.044-07:00some lovely images in there. Very visual and worth...some lovely images in there. Very visual and worth reworking I think. Perfection is different every dayEmerging Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06539530495238043923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-15734453297781989732010-09-12T05:15:28.898-07:002010-09-12T05:15:28.898-07:00Weaver,
You are so precise and elegant in your wor...Weaver,<br />You are so precise and elegant in your words.<br />An odd idea about color vanishing in the autumn<br /><br />maybe it is just the effects of light!Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03964291132366262298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-27367330606444165792010-09-11T18:43:51.320-07:002010-09-11T18:43:51.320-07:00What beautiful pictures! I am your newest follower...What beautiful pictures! I am your newest follower- please come be mine.The Stonehedge Farmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982792906749807214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-67148023688065609992010-09-11T15:29:09.372-07:002010-09-11T15:29:09.372-07:00Sometimes go with the first draft, Pat. This is de...Sometimes go with the first draft, Pat. This is delightful - simple, economical and wonderfully vivid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-3977371333355730222010-09-11T15:01:14.765-07:002010-09-11T15:01:14.765-07:00I love the spontaneous beauty of your poem, Pat. S...I love the spontaneous beauty of your poem, Pat. Some beautiful descriptive phrases and altogether a feeling of loss and consolation (I think...)Hildredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05420791064923078834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-43650667239690791872010-09-11T12:19:57.130-07:002010-09-11T12:19:57.130-07:00You create a very mysterious atmosphere of a darke...You create a very mysterious atmosphere of a darkening night.<br />Thanks for your comment on 9 11. You are right we must not forget.Reader Wilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06384603525251159272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-91749927182435564032010-09-11T11:11:51.997-07:002010-09-11T11:11:51.997-07:00Nice reflective poem, Pat. I, too, like the line ...Nice reflective poem, Pat. I, too, like the line about the "cold silver of the sky."Georgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03959953035812596907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-8788076645465177482010-09-11T10:43:46.652-07:002010-09-11T10:43:46.652-07:00"Cold silver of the sky"
is wonderful
..."Cold silver of the sky"<br />is wonderful<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Warm Aloha from Waikiki <br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-74740199747433031042010-09-11T10:38:27.157-07:002010-09-11T10:38:27.157-07:00Beautiful Pat - I felt I was beside you.Beautiful Pat - I felt I was beside you.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06826501916623305535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-30533517373111491492010-09-11T10:30:29.702-07:002010-09-11T10:30:29.702-07:00I love it! Dark and foreboding, full of possibilit...I love it! Dark and foreboding, full of possibilities.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-56393396531100254652010-09-11T08:56:48.685-07:002010-09-11T08:56:48.685-07:00Oh this dark, rich and velvet to the tongue - grea...Oh this dark, rich and velvet to the tongue - great stuff.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08915236568015079389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-27255021121479827942010-09-11T08:47:38.571-07:002010-09-11T08:47:38.571-07:00Could be a 'Ted Hughes' that one Weaver!Could be a 'Ted Hughes' that one Weaver!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-64264767145871632122010-09-11T08:44:03.692-07:002010-09-11T08:44:03.692-07:00That is so evocative, Weaver. I especially liked ...That is so evocative, Weaver. I especially liked the shape slipping into liquid metal. Beautiful.Bovey Bellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13117332471600275100noreply@blogger.com