tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post1005994439251533014..comments2024-03-28T17:44:17.403-07:00Comments on The Weaver of Grass: Long Live the Poetry Bus!The Weaver of Grasshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-64831095746180419732010-08-18T09:13:35.111-07:002010-08-18T09:13:35.111-07:00Beautiful Weaver, one of your best.A natural poeti...Beautiful Weaver, one of your best.A natural poetic quality, pure and simple and lovely.<br /><br />the word verification is unctusly which is an o and u short of an insult I hope!Blasted blogger that is uncalled for!Totalfeckineejithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05352708391465031655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-54955884416632752362010-08-17T05:58:52.811-07:002010-08-17T05:58:52.811-07:00I like it, the transistion from first stanza to se...I like it, the transistion from first stanza to second and this line in particular...."when the distant scene held a place in my head." We often do that, neglecting what lies in front of us.<br /><br />Thank you!Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-77545311390519797882010-08-16T22:57:31.845-07:002010-08-16T22:57:31.845-07:00I am all for the love you have described in the po...I am all for the love you have described in the poem...<br />There is a potent sweetness to it-Loved it!Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-52845798673021483542010-08-16T08:15:39.892-07:002010-08-16T08:15:39.892-07:00I love how you see so many possibilities from one ...I love how you see so many possibilities from one lonely, still, boat.NanUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11596765792663269178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-26182693164559908792010-08-16T07:07:44.425-07:002010-08-16T07:07:44.425-07:00Thanks for the kind comments. Haven't read it...Thanks for the kind comments. Haven't read it to the farmer yet - shall have to choose my moment!The Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-22213104169743775532010-08-16T01:14:43.374-07:002010-08-16T01:14:43.374-07:00I really like this Weaver - as always your candidn...I really like this Weaver - as always your candidness is refreshing, and I love how the tragedy of the here and now lying dead was changed in the end.<br />beautifulNiamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-17612876084626558382010-08-15T19:03:28.402-07:002010-08-15T19:03:28.402-07:00What a beautiful take on the prompt, Weaver. A lov...What a beautiful take on the prompt, Weaver. A love poem emerges from a history and sails to a future.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-71160387119354631972010-08-15T14:27:03.148-07:002010-08-15T14:27:03.148-07:00Absolute Beautiful !
I felt every word.
cheers, ...Absolute Beautiful !<br />I felt every word.<br /><br />cheers, parsnipangryparsniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17236094827257446781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-34148306051900214422010-08-15T09:35:22.265-07:002010-08-15T09:35:22.265-07:00Very beautiful poem! I admire you for the poet you...Very beautiful poem! I admire you for the poet you are and many other great qualities. Thanks for your comment. I remember what you told about your first husband.War is hell.Reader Wilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06384603525251159272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-18450727224340039242010-08-15T04:51:22.895-07:002010-08-15T04:51:22.895-07:00Beautifully simple and simply beautiful, Weaver!Beautifully simple and simply beautiful, Weaver!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-46669624930769054762010-08-15T04:03:42.884-07:002010-08-15T04:03:42.884-07:00Well, you've certainly sailed the waters of li...Well, you've certainly sailed the waters of life...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-39768286123907492662010-08-15T02:55:26.821-07:002010-08-15T02:55:26.821-07:00I like this poem very much indeed. It is a clever ...I like this poem very much indeed. It is a clever response to the prompt and a sensitive approach to the subject you have made from it. It works on all levels. Great contribution.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-3982738459238602932010-08-15T01:42:52.574-07:002010-08-15T01:42:52.574-07:00A lovely poem Pat! As you know, we are not far fro...A lovely poem Pat! As you know, we are not far from Whitby and visit there at least once a week. The rows and rows of boats always conjur up stories and pictures!mrsnesbitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16882736507772457598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-6926407956533990272010-08-14T18:32:02.341-07:002010-08-14T18:32:02.341-07:00well felt!
Warm Aloha from Waikiki :)
Comfor...well felt!<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Warm Aloha from Waikiki :) <br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-59257881234866778682010-08-14T17:45:18.026-07:002010-08-14T17:45:18.026-07:00How sweet and simple and compelling this is! It...How sweet and simple and compelling this is! It's a beautiful testament to love.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-6524107870612750722010-08-14T17:16:24.722-07:002010-08-14T17:16:24.722-07:00A wonderful love poem, Pat, but it leaves me wonde...A wonderful love poem, Pat, but it leaves me wondering who the "you" is -- a person, the divine, the present moment. No need to know, however; the mystery adds life to the poem.Georgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03959953035812596907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-26041807282982090562010-08-14T12:31:37.860-07:002010-08-14T12:31:37.860-07:00What a beautiful poem Pat - so full of meaning whi...What a beautiful poem Pat - so full of meaning which will reach out to many readers. I couldn't take part this week as I was unable to access Enchanted Oak's blog for some reason. The links just wouldn't work for me. I'm just going to read your poem again.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06826501916623305535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-20637153535151842062010-08-14T12:30:21.493-07:002010-08-14T12:30:21.493-07:00Yes beautiful indded. What is it about boats?
&quo...Yes beautiful indded. What is it about boats?<br />"I knew that you were my<br />Voyage of Discovery,<br />my inspiration,<br />my destination."Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08915236568015079389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-38093832711768258232010-08-14T11:58:06.842-07:002010-08-14T11:58:06.842-07:00As usual, lovely.As usual, lovely.Pamela Terry and Edwardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12746603636884819522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-32521666838821860372010-08-14T11:48:26.639-07:002010-08-14T11:48:26.639-07:00Weaver, dreaming in the here and now is good ... l...Weaver, dreaming in the here and now is good ... love your Bus offering.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-76246239285265589762010-08-14T10:24:58.258-07:002010-08-14T10:24:58.258-07:00I don't usually comment on poetry posts. This...I don't usually comment on poetry posts. This one is beautiful - it says something to me too.Pondsidehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02407539138546412482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-280582018791422638.post-80205288875040020242010-08-14T10:22:25.994-07:002010-08-14T10:22:25.994-07:00Your love poem is beautiful, Weaver. The discovery...Your love poem is beautiful, Weaver. The discovery that the richest voyage is the one before you, not the one on the far horizon, resonates with me.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.com